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Sammael Sin 3/2/10 . chapter 13
It may be new to say, I think that Vega would like to see Ororo as his mother. If we remember that he was a troubled child. His father mistreat him and his mother. Finally, his father killed mother. And she called him. "Boy", I do not think this is Ororo / Vega, because she saw him as a only child.

This is a fic that Vega's most heavily injured, from which I have been reading (Sagat's so sadist)... _"...
anon 6/12/09 . chapter 14
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!

I want to find out what happens with Vega and Ororo!

Continue this story!
Chigirl 5/1/08 . chapter 14
Oh please update this story! I love it! Its full of suspense and danger and romance and drama. I would have never thought an Xmen and Street Fighter could xover be incredibly good fic! Please update soon!
story reader 8/7/07 . chapter 14
WOW, never thought this pairing was possible. But holy shit I am impressed! I hardly ever go into these categories and I'm certainly glad I did. I was looking for some of "those" fics.. but stumbled across yours instead. And I'm proud of myself for staying up most of the night to read it all in one go.

Don't get me wrong, I tried to stop after chapter four, for some much needed sleep. But I couldn't, you had me HOOKED!
BarbaraB 5/29/07 . chapter 14
I'd like to read more stories with Ororo and vega. This chapter was good, of course. I'm dying to see the interaction between Wolvering and Vega
RTG 5/24/07 . chapter 14
I don't know whether to worry that things are going to get better or if things are going to get worse. Everything is just getting too hopeful, and things never go that smoothly. I'm anticipating. I want to see where all this is going.
V. Fan 5/9/07 . chapter 13
This chapter made me smile. Ororo teasing Vega was too cute. Red lipstick, go Vega. He's appalled that she wants to domesticate him, like she plans to take him home and turn him into a house husband. Thank you for taking Vega's character to another level without compromising who he is without a good reason. And a BIG thanks for not making him oversexed, a fangirl's wet dream, stupid, et cetera. Thank you for showing he has his own skewed sense of morals, that he does have thoughts, that his isn't just to do or die. I know you've been working on this story a while, but it's worth the wait.
V. Fan 5/9/07 . chapter 12
Work soon, but I want to read and review these last two chapters. They might not be long. I'm sorry. Bison. Ugh. Just ugh. I don't like the guy, but who does? Everything's so uncertain now. Figures he'd do something to help himself. Poor Ororo. Vega had to save her life. To save someone's life is a big step in the right direction for him. He's not callous, or he's "learning" to be more compassionate-despite what he says.
V. Fan 5/9/07 . chapter 10
Sagat is creepy in a Santa's Creepy Lil Secret way, not deliciously creepy in a Vega sort of way. He's obsessed and obsession is not good. He just needs to go with the flow and let the Ororo/Vega thrive, which I think it will regardless of Sagat. Even if it doesn't, Ororo is right. You can't put two people in a situation where they depend on each other and NOT expect something to come of it. I've noticed that I've been concentrating on this side of the story so much. I want you to know that I do like how you're handle Elena and Logan. She's so cheerful. It offsets his seriousness perfectly.
V. Fan 5/9/07 . chapter 8
Now, that's powerful. Ororo seems to be getting through to Vega a little, but at the same time, he's starting to get through to Ororo. It's like she's transferring all her good to him and in return, he's giving her some of his bad. The fact that she even had such a Vega-esque thought is strong. You're showing it's not just a one-way thing between. She's as receptive to him as he is, learning just as much from him as he's learning from her. Unlike Vega, though, she knows what she has to do. She knows that she can't let such thoughts overcome her.

My poor, conflicted Vega. You write him so well that he makes me angry and breaks my heart all in the same sentence. And you've made him very smart, not that I think he's dumb. Writers tend to write him a little dim. Yes, he somehow managed to get thrashed by a couch. That just makes Chun-Li strong. That doesn't make him stupid. Rant off. He has to be smart to do what he does. He's awful, but he has to have some thoughts about what he does, too, as you've showed.
Vega Fan 5/9/07 . chapter 7
Elena does talk a lot. I think it works for her because she seems overly friendly. I think I know where you're going with her healing special. That fight between Ororo and Vega was very telling, but subtle about it. Vega being threatened by a man he doesn't know just because Ororo said he was a good fighter. Shows that Vega is trying to hold on to that pride.
Vega Fanatic 5/9/07 . chapter 6
Sorry I couldn't finish reviewing yesterday. I couldn't stay on long because I had to work. I really wanted to finish this story. So I made a note to myself to come back and finish reviewing. You've included Elena. I can't say that I've ever read too many stories that gave Elena an active role besides just being there.

I think you've nicely intertwined Sagat's history with Ororo making it so much more than just a story with characters from different fandoms. You've shown how it is possible for them to "know" each other even though the fandoms are different. And you're creating a new history for them by introducing characters like Elena and allowing her to interact with Logan. I hope you plan to keep her around.
Vega Fan 5/8/07 . chapter 5
Oh My God, that was telling as far as Sagat and Ororo are concerned and it was brutal as far as Vega went. They were together once. I hadn't imagined what I thought I was picking up in the story. I can't believe he did that to Vega. He is going to break him down if he continues in that direction. It's hard to hold on to your arrogance when someone's torturing you. I almost cried for him. How could Sagat be so cruel. Does he really hate Vega that much?
Vega Fan 5/8/07 . chapter 4
It is a killer how the simplest things get you in the most trouble. I know just a little about Logan from some of the recent comic books when Ororo got married. I like him better in the comics than I did the movies. He seems more honorable in the comics I have seen than in the movie chasing around Jean in a love sick rage. It's good that he's going to do something for his friends. It isn't going to go easy.
Vega Fan 5/8/07 . chapter 3
I think on some subconscious level Vega knows he needs help. For all his personal reassurances, death threats and arrogance he realizes that he does need the help. He just won't admit it to himself or to Ororo at this point. Why else would he felt the need to "help" her? Vega is so deliciously creepy right now, though.
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