I have a feeling this would make more sense if I watched the film.

Good-o. Your reviews have confirmed that this is an alternate ending. Hopefully the real thing is less angsty?

I love the phrase 'self-fulfilling prophecy'

Oooohhh, that's harsh :S

awww just awww that was sad ugh

so good, but so angsty. D:

Very nicely done! You conveyed an astounding amount of emotion and detail in just 200 words. This would make for an amazing alternate ending to the beach scene. Great work!

...I like it...A lot...Keep up the good work and update soon...( I hope it is not a one-shot)...:)

But what missiles is it?