His is wonderfully written. It's so dramatic and poetic and I love it. Great job. :)

Wow, that was pretty chilling to read!

And, to be honest, I really love your characterization of Glimmer! Such little details you gave her made her vividly come to life!

I think you did a great job with this. I really liked how you wrote this. Awesome job!

Wow! This is really good and powerful! I love Glimmer and I really enjoyed this! GREAT JOB!

This is coffee, on vacation, typing on my 3DS. (And where's my oneshot? :P)

You told me that you wanted to get on the tvtropes fanfic rec list. In my opinion, you're not quite there yet, but you're close. Give it another few months of practice. You'll see.

Wow, that's haunting O_O

And very very good! Keep up the good work 3

Love, love, absoulutely lo-ve!

(Haha.)

Perfect name, perfect pace, perfect description.

Overall perfect-y-ness. Ish.

Is that a word?

The end hit me hard. That's what I ALWAYS search for. The fic/drabble/story/one-shot should always make one lasting impression on the reader. Glad to say, you did just that.

''She screamed."

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