|Reviews for Seeing With New Eyes|
| Lisa Cooper 10/16/12 . chapter 1
Good story! Lisa
| Guest 8/9/12 . chapter 1
I was totally thing they should have done this in the movie!( Garret getting his sight back )
| Guest 7/10/12 . chapter 1
Wow that was beautiful thank you for putting it on fanfiction so i can read it.
| SesshyGal 10/19/11 . chapter 1
that was so good
| YAYfanfics101 10/8/11 . chapter 1
this is really sweet :3 Though, in my opinion, him being able to see was just a BIT cliche, but that's fine :3 it was an awesome oneshot X3
| suns and stars 9/26/11 . chapter 1
that was beautiful I wish that garret got his sight back like Authors arm healed
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 9/12/11 . chapter 1
Not sure if English is your first language or not...but well, the grammar and punctuation in this needs major work.
For instance, grammar:
'...Garrett responded swirled her around to face him.' should be '...Garrett responded, swirling (Actually, *twirling* would be a more accurate word, but to each his own) her around to face him.'
That can also be helped by the up-top example.
If you need more help or clarification, please feel free to ask. Sorry if I sound mean up at the top, but this is just meant to be concrit. And besides that, I just had to put my dog down today at the vet's, so I'm more irritable than normal because it's been a bad day...
| kittycatvamp 8/20/11 . chapter 1
| LucyNash 7/12/11 . chapter 1
awww its so cute! :) xx
| stayc34 7/4/11 . chapter 1
Awesome Story! completely the way i would have ended it.
Love the way you write, keep up the good work!
| Julianna Tala 6/22/11 . chapter 1
OMG! This is cuteness to the max! Nice job! I'm glad that this archive is not completely dead...Nice fluff at the end by the way! -