| Reviews for Seeing With New Eyes |
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Lisa Cooper 10/16/12 . chapter 1Good story! Lisa |
Guest 8/9/12 . chapter 1 I was totally thing they should have done this in the movie!( Garret getting his sight back ) |
Guest 7/10/12 . chapter 1 Wow that was beautiful thank you for putting it on fanfiction so i can read it. |
SesshyGal 10/19/11 . chapter 1that was so good |
YAYfanfics101 10/8/11 . chapter 1this is really sweet :3 Though, in my opinion, him being able to see was just a BIT cliche, but that's fine :3 it was an awesome oneshot X3 |
suns and stars 9/26/11 . chapter 1that was beautiful I wish that garret got his sight back like Authors arm healed |
Shizuku Tsukishima749 9/12/11 . chapter 1Not sure if English is your first language or not...but well, the grammar and punctuation in this needs major work. For instance, grammar: '...Garrett responded swirled her around to face him.' should be '...Garrett responded, swirling (Actually, *twirling* would be a more accurate word, but to each his own) her around to face him.' Punctuation: That can also be helped by the up-top example. If you need more help or clarification, please feel free to ask. Sorry if I sound mean up at the top, but this is just meant to be concrit. And besides that, I just had to put my dog down today at the vet's, so I'm more irritable than normal because it's been a bad day... |
kittycatvamp 8/20/11 . chapter 1yay!:) |
LucyNash 7/12/11 . chapter 1awww its so cute! :) xx |
stayc34 7/4/11 . chapter 1Awesome Story! completely the way i would have ended it. Love the way you write, keep up the good work! |
Julianna Tala 6/22/11 . chapter 1OMG! This is cuteness to the max! Nice job! I'm glad that this archive is not completely dead...Nice fluff at the end by the way! - |