 narurama 8/18/11 . chapter 1I know its been a while since you last wrote this fanfiction but i was wondering if you wouldn't mind completing it, i would love to know how it ends. |
 D.J striker 2/3/09 . chapter 6Aww... i love this story why stop its reeally quite amazin... plzz continue... is about time some1 write about well.. not reeally.. but i like readin about Pokemon's & digimon... sometime.. not always they're trainers/Tamers...
:) Kep it up... plzz T.T it was gettin interetin... & i didn't know he would fal in love or... like that other Charizard .. |
 Ana 5/15/08 . chapter 6 Update soon please! _
i cant wait 4 the next chapter! awesome story!:P |
 HelenaLevi 2/28/08 . chapter 6Pretty Good! I like how you put Charizard's feelings about Ash being it's trainer, and how it kept telling itself "This guys an idiot I don't need to listen to him". But the thing is, Onix says "Roar" not "Onix". You did that for Charizard too. Otherwize, that was great! Good job once more for another well done Pokemon Fanfic. D |
 FlamesEmbrace 3/15/07 . chapter 6It's a shame that all decent pokemon fics are ancient and half-finished, isn't it? xD
Anyway, I liked it so I'll throw out a review anyway. This was a super-cute story- the way you managed to get even Squirtle and Bulbasaur's personalities dead-on when they got so little development in the show was lovely. I can see where this was going, and I'm sure the ending would've been wonderful! |
 Deja Know I Been Lookin For Vu 2/14/04 . chapter 6And then?
Blargh! You can't leave us without an ending! UPDATE! |
 nightdragon0 9/18/03 . chapter 6Wow, that was pretty nice! Charizard's 'good' old times.
Hm...I suppose I could always guess how the ending's going to be. |
 Ash Vault Rose Garden 4/12/03 . chapter 1ha ha stupid ash! great storie i wish u could write more oh well bye! |
 Kocoro 3/3/02 . chapter 6ooo what happened please write more pleease |
 anon 5/18/01 . chapter 6 More more! Awesome awesome! |
 Brian Sherlock 12/26/00 . chapter 1I feel quite indiferent. Not that I am saying they're crappy or anything, because they are, by the ways I think, standard at the least, but maybe your should read some of my fanfictions after I upgrade them. You can read them now, but they're full of errors gramatical, and misspelings. |
 Hahn 12/9/00 . chapter 1NOOOO! Finish this story! Must read more! Cliffhanger! Readmorereadmoremustmustmust! |
 windsong64 12/3/00 . chapter 1 This is a great story. Are you ever going to continue it? |
 Tim2 10/8/00 . chapter 1Get on with the next part already.
I magically seem to be finding myself becoming a fan of ALL of your stories... Somebody stop me...
I worship Dragoness - DRAGONESS FOREVER! |
 Passer-By 9/10/00 . chapter 1 Guess the heat's getting to him. :P |