Wow, I actually really love this story. The ending is so adorable, though the last line is a little haunting! You've made me enjoy this couple, which I thought would be near impossible. Great job!

Wow. Really, wow. I love the way he FINALLY told her that he loved their squabbles, just before it all went down the pan. Keep writing

nice Nami such a good job! i can actually see that happening cause that's what happens when an author creates a character and then does do much with them (the wonderful people of Fanfiction get free reign) great job!