I really liked this story! There's so little fic in this fandom, and even less fic about my OTP. I think you did a nice job capturing their voices, and an especially nice job conveying the depth of Jackie's pain.

I love them together. They make the most sense, I think. This is so dark and sad, and I do wish there was more! Great writing. :)

I love that someone finally posted a Jackie/O'Hara story! I love them together! I loved everything about your story except for one thing...that it ended. I was hoping for a continuation. All well. Loved it anyway!