|Reviews for May Light Break Through|
| ChaosxPaladin 11/29/12 . chapter 1
Very interesting indeed, although it's a shame that there's only one chapter. However, you have gotten off on a great start, so I"m willing to wait for the next chapter if there ever will be one.
In terms of the Warrior of Light's personality, its definitely within his patience to put up with Louise, although I see him grow on Louise as an older brother figure and teacher. She could look up to him as a powerful, independent and righteous figure, someone who she would strive to be like. In a way, he could literally be a second Brimir with his "holy" powers. With his abilities, he would most definitely be able to impress her with his swordplay and magic, and perhaps even you could make it so that the WoL's magic be connected to her void magic. Kinda weird contrasts though, considering how WoL controls light and Void is literally nothingness, but its possible if you twist the rules. Anyway, hope this helps and that you update soon!
| Agito XIII 8/21/11 . chapter 1
So much potential, this one. Pls continue.
| Shadic the Hedgehog Author 8/5/11 . chapter 1
I don't know much about Zero no Tsukaima/Familiar of Zero at the moment (though I've read some of the Trope page and my buddy's watching the show), but considering where you've started, I doubt I'll have much trouble keeping up.
Also, when it came to when WoL-y was coming from, I thought he was coming from after Feral Chaos killed him in the 19/20th cycle, which was a "permanent" death. Considering the date you posted and the mention of the 12th cycle, I have to hope that you've played Main Scenario 000.
In any case, I hope you manage to write more, this looks to be pretty good.
| Sir Godot 7/13/11 . chapter 1
The Warrior of Light is an excellent choice as Louise's familiar. I hope to read more of Light's adventures soon, it's very promising so far.
Keep up the good work,
| cooking samurai 6/25/11 . chapter 1
Cool story. I really like it and hope it go's on longer. I think Gilgamesh might appear later in your story because of his ability of going into different worlds.
| Fenrir034 6/24/11 . chapter 1
Great, it was interesting, you make my day
| Wa7tch1nK1d 6/22/11 . chapter 1
Interesting choice on Louise summoning WoL.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Keep it up.
| FallenSeraphXeno 6/22/11 . chapter 1
Great start yay the summoned is not treated like crap can't wait for next chapter
| chronotimeguard 6/21/11 . chapter 1
I have to admit, this has got me pretty intrestead. I mean it's warrior of light. THE WARRIOR OF LIGHT from the final fantasy series. Seeing a person like him serve Louis is quite a change from all of those other crossovers I've read. I'm greatly intrigue on what direction your going to take this story in.
I'm glad you gave Louis and the other students such a different reaction to warrior of light. Their is no way they could think of him a some measly commoner. I mean, he a person who litteraly radiats light and fights the minions of chaos itself. He gives off such a divine and majestic aura that even Louis has to admit to.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
| bakapervert 6/21/11 . chapter 1
| Lucaris 6/21/11 . chapter 1
A wonderful start. I'm already hooked. A few tiny errors here and there, but I honestly do not care for them since this chapter was such a delight to read.
This is one of the few fics that present the familiar as someone who is willing to serve. And not be annoyed by Louise's mannerisms. You portray the Warrior of Light well in this case.
Looking forward to the next chapter!