Excellent.

Ummm... doesn't exactly rhyme... (sorry, I hold grudges against non-rhyming poems _) But it's a good concept.

i guess this was for cassie, since rachel obviously likes the fighting (sum of the time, anyway)... nope, i have nothing else to say here. this is why i put my "reviews" in the number above when i say stupid stuff in here.

Interesting...

That was good. )

Repetition is good, but there is such a thing as too much repeition.

You left out one essential part...Who's life was torn to shreds?

interesting