It is really good.

Wonderful. I'll just say that. You got Rika's ice cold personality down pat.

A very nice story. I love how you write. Because your very CLEAR in the story. You didn't do any loop holes when you don't know what's happening. Anyway IF you like any Renamon story come over and see my Renamon story 'changing spirit'. I will say it again VERY nice

Poor Rika. Very well writen.

Sad ending, but I actually liked are too many gloomy, angsty stories out there,but then there are too many stories where everything is picture perfect in the end. Not all parents love their kids and some do run off and never return, and there are some who do 'raise' the kids, but they don't love them and can be abusive.

Keep up the good you should write a sequel when Ruki/Rika is older and meets her father, and pops him good. He'll deserve it.

Rika doing what she did at the end of the story sounds like something she would do indefinitely! Keep up the good work on these stories!

i wuv this story. *starts to bawl eyes out* it is so sad *sniff* that Rika may never *sniff* see her father again. I want to read more of your fics

What a powerful and insightful story. I loved the detail in the flashback and how it fits the way Rika's personality developed; realistic and interesting. Poetic justice with the tearing of the letter, and the build-up towards it was strong and inspirational. With the way this category is so crowded on this site nowadays, it was refreshing to come across something as good as this. A WINNER IS YOU

This was very nicely done, and I think you did pretty good in portraying Ruki's character. Hope to see more like this from you! DaisukeFire, the Rukist