I've always wondered about that hair. It can't possibly stay up on its own the entire day (especially with the lives they had).

Prepare to have me overanalyze your fic!

(coughs)

The level of detail when describing Yugi's styling efforts makes that the most important thing in the fic. The focus is on Yugi's appearance, not his emotions, so his thought of touching Atem is all the more sad. Yugi refers to the pharaoh as his other self, not Atem, which (to me) serves to make the moment sound more intimate. Rather than using the name Atem, Yugi uses his own name for tha pharaoh.

I like this fic.

-BS

love it ;)

This is literally the first thing I read after just finishing the end of the manga. Ow. My heart. T_T