I love the last chapter! It's so funny and really entertaining reading Legolas and Gimli banter. Thanks so much for this story!

Yay! Alede is going to be in this one... I think...

Very nice. I loved every minute of it (well...except elves taking lovers...I don't like straying from canon in that) but otherwise...LOVED this story!

NiRi

EEK! Ok, I was wrong. Very nicely done intrigue. And not very nice to leave one off at a place like this!

NiRi

Ok, I feel guilty. I stumbled onto your stories and have been devouring them without leaving reviews. Now, I have a very good excuse! I can't stop reading long enough to stop and type! I need to see what happens next.

This is truly a fascinating Legolas tale. A little on the simple side, but utterly delightful. Oh, and I think it's Unilyn! I've thought so from the moment you introduced her! *runs to see if I'm right*

NiRi

WAI! Omg so funny. Lovely job with this story, really, I'm quite in love with Alede now. I've always been in love with Legolas, so this didn't change anything! I'll read the next ones when I get home from work. Oyasumi nasai!

Did you get the name Greymalcin from the Olde English name for the witch goddess Hecate's familiar, the black cat Greymalkin? Cool idea, in any case. Plus... ew.

Oh is it Unilyn? I don't like her, I hope it's her. Get your paws off Alede's man, wench!

I'm really starting to like Alede, she reminds me of myself quite a bit. Except for the bit with the power and comeliness. But otherwise, easy for me to identify with. Great job!

Oh, I just HAD to reread this story, it is ALL too enjoyable! I said good job then, I say good job now! ^_^

ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! I have been absolutely entranced by this story and The Road to Isengard and I can't wait to read Faeries Goblet either. The entire story kept me guessing (even though I had a feeling it was Unilyn all along) I anticipate that your next story will have me biting off my hands with joy, fear, anger and happiness as this one has. AMAZING!

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PS I love Gimli's 'swelling'!

Aww...how sweet...well this is the end...but it was a very good end. I loved it. It's very sweet...ah well...next story!!

Cat


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1. "...He is as rooted to Mirkwood as one of his beach trees..." Beech trees not Beach trees...last time I checked there were not trees that grew beach balls.

I say again..you have one seriously messed up mind...A very good mind, mind you, but messed up all the same...oh, i've read the summary for the story after this..I know you're going to have Alede fall in love with some one else...I think you enjoy pulling these strings on your characters...I do too..but it's not quite as funny when you're on the other end. Hmph...

oh well...it's very good as usual...I'm starting think it would be impossible for you to write something that isn't good...

Cat

I KNEW IT!! I KNEW IT WAS HER!!

I feel smart now...I knew it was her...it was just so obvious. Very twisting plot..what's in the next chapter I wonder...hmm...

Cat

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1. "...let everyone believe that he was too week to leave his rooms..." Week to weak...just a simple type-o.

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My god, am I ever glad I did not find this when you were orginally writing it...or I would've died at these evil cliffhangers...It's very good...and intriguing...no errors for me to find...they're getting fewer and fewer.

Cat