My friend Elle told me to read your Lemonade Mouth fanfictions (particularly this one) a while back and I hadn't yet. But today I found this in my bookmarks and decided to actually read it.

And let me tell you, I'm so glad I did. It's really great! _

I'm not too big a fan of Rayella, but I have a feeling I will be when I finish reading your fanfictions. ;)

You're a very talented writer! This had the perfect amount of details and the perfect amount of adorableness. :D

Keep up the amazing work! This is really awesome! _

My favourite part of your fic:

BEGIN QUOTE- As he stepped off the platform of Stella's bed, she murmured loud enough for him to hear:

"Thanks for playing Mr. Nice Guy for me Ray." -END QUOTE

It summed up everything quite nicely. It was great. I'm a huge Rayella fan, but I kind of get aggravated when people get facts wrong (Stella is a vegeterian. She DOESN'T eat MEAT!), but you've portrayed Stella and Ray quite nicely. I can see this happening in LM2.

Ever considered making this a chapter story?

Don't worry about that, though. Some stories are amazing on their own. This is one of them.

ok, this review just so happends 2 be a major wenivia fan but im slowly starting to like rayella as well but ya LOVE THIS STORY, it's soooooooooooooo going on my fav list XD

D'aww, that last part. :')

aww! i love ray and stella! :D

if only they showed some romance between them in the movie.. :(

:)

aw cute

Wow, this was SO awesome...loved the title, loved the concept of Ray "playing nice guy" to Stella...it was AWESOME!

That. Was. So. CUTE! I loved especially how you didn't make the characters OOC. Good job! :D

awww keep going! :D -Victoria

This is super amazing. xD It felt more friendship Rayella which I love almost as much as romantic Rayella. (; I need more of you, seriously. ;D

I love it. I kbow i'm a Starlie shipper but i'm kinda lOvin' Rayella too. I hope u don't make oneshots...

I hope u make multi chapter stories :)