Holy shit, sick ass first chapter.

Nice chapters. The story moves forward well, there is suspense...

Punisher posing as a lawyer...clever!

Maybe the cop would scream and lose it and force his way in his house and THEN collapse and lose it further...

Yiu are forgiven for your silence ;-).

Don't worry, it's decent length: long enough to be a real chapter, and short enough so it doesn't drag.

N.C

Hmmm...Collins and Moran. Wherever did you pull those names from, sister sweet ;-).

Great chapter, humor, action, I loved it!

Noi

A very good entry into the series; I felt less like I was reading fan fiction and more like I was reading a text-only version of one of Garth Ennis' pieces. A few minor grammatical errors cropped up, but it would do you a disservice to repeat what other reviewers have said and overall, it didn't detract from my enjoyment of your work.

I'll be posting the prologue to some recent work of my own soon, so I might suggest you keep an eye out for that :)

Good story line, obviously you have done your homework. Please add another chapter soon.

Just what the other reviewers said, make sure your paragraphs don't go for too long and 'enter' when people are talking.

Noi

Interesting beginning.

The action seemed rushed a bit at times...

Also, dialogue: I think it would improve how easily the story can be read if you switched lines at each line of dialogue.

EXEMPLE:

«Hey, who are you?»

«I'm the guy who did...»

Like that.

Keep at it, it's an interesting idea.

You gave me a review on my Punisher story, so i'm gonna return the favor. This was pretty good, some spelling errors but we all do that.

nice job, i'll be watching