| Reviews for Jack, Jill and a Foosball Table |
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FireandIceBoth 7/16/11 . chapter 2I voted! Good luck I hope you win! |
mommy2kh 7/16/11 . chapter 2*waves hand* I did all three! |
TheRainGirl 7/16/11 . chapter 1Aww very cute! |
cottoncandybl52 7/15/11 . chapter 1Kul story |
afonz 7/14/11 . chapter 1Love, love, LOVED it! It was funny, cute, and hot of course! |
bonz245 7/14/11 . chapter 1Loved this... Thanks Carol |
secretobsession7 7/14/11 . chapter 1That was so frigging hot! I wish there was more! I love your writing, I'm so glad I got to read it! |
FireandIceBoth 7/11/11 . chapter 1You have a review and my vote. :) |
bellalove72 7/10/11 . chapter 11. my dog, Bailey once pulled a hitter box out of B's duffle bag when he was spending the night. He just told his story earlier today! LOL 2. When I was little I was always hot. No covers, no long sleeves, etc. My mom used to call me a hotbox all the time. When I started dating B I used to say I'm a 'hotbox' and he'd laugh at me. I didn't know why. LOL 3. BIG mistake, BIG, HUGE that I said this sounded like an autobiography. Was very difficult for me not to picture you as Bella! yeah, awkward! LMAO 4. You know I love you to the moon and back but dude I don't care how bitchy you get I'm NEVER gonna flick your bean! I might make you a brownie though! :) Jack, Jill and a Fooseball Table was really cute! I loved it! And once I was able to get the you outta my head as Bella, (no offense!) It was really quite funny and fuckhawt! damn, love a masturbating E! ILY! LOL! (just not enough to flick your bean!:)) xoxoxo |
Willow De Rosa 7/9/11 . chapter 1This was great! The leading up was quirky and funny, the middle was hot and dangerous and emotional, and the end was perfect! Good job to you and your wankers. |
Fliberty 7/9/11 . chapter 1This was a mixture of things. The parts with the rest of the gang were funny. The part with Edward was hot but sweet too. I liked how he was focused on Bella and aroused by her but adoring rather than just lecherous. |
MrsK81 7/9/11 . chapter 1Fab job. I would love there to be a few more chapters of this once the contest is over! Loved the ending too lol |
Coleen561 7/9/11 . chapter 1This was a fun one-shot. You did a great job with this. Thanks for posting it. |
MoJo40 - Ffaddward 7/9/11 . chapter 1Loved it :) |
byhelenahandbasket 7/9/11 . chapter 1Holy... Wow. Just...wow. |