Glad to see that you're still writing. Still really worried about the boys

This was pretty good! A few grammar mistakes, but other than that quite interesting! I wonder what's gonna happen next.

Hi! I wanted to ask if you're nearly done with the next chapter. Just wondering. Sorry, though; I don't have any ideas you could use for a flash-back. :). Thanks!

P.S: The whole thing's really nice. You should keep it up!

I was surprised when I noticed that I didn't write a review for this chapter. But once I read the chapter again today, I remembered that I had read it already. I've somehow never posted this review! That's really new to me...

This was my review...

Oh, it's getting better and better by every chapter!

I just can't wait to read the next chapter!

xxx'jes

Eszie

Awww...you forgot to name Chapter 6. But I'm glad Scrooge is finally wising up to Della's ways! And I also liked that you ended the chapter with a bit of suspense and foreboding! Keep up the good work!

If only Scrooge knew of what was happening, Della would already be back in jail, where she belongs. Della, the way she's treating the boys, she doesn't deserve to have anything to do with them. I wonder what's going to happen next.

Cool! I think you've really improved since this fic was first posted! The flow of the story is better, the plot and character interactions are more complex! Hopefully, Della's attitude and lazy behavior will raise a few flags for Uncle Scrooge!

Oh, it's getting better and better by every chapter!

I just can't wait to read the next chapter!

xxx'jes

Eszie

Really good so far. I love how you used some of my ideas in the story.

It's a wonderful chapter once again.

I think the idea of bringing Della's boyfriend into the story.

And Daisy and Scrooge's sisters could be visiting Scrooge for some reason. (Maybe Daisy missed the nephews for some reason or maybe she needs them for a good cause)

Keep up the wonderful work!

Poor boys!

Della, if they had told any adult in that house you can bet you would have been out on your ass before you had a chance to ask them about it.

Okay, I really hate Della and what she's doing to those boys but I love your writing. If this story gets much more intense though I think I might break down in tears.

Great job,

Keep up the good work,

Kelly

PS: If you're interested, I've started a Phineas and Ferb story. Shameless plug, I know and I'm sorry but I'm trying to get the word out since I'm new to that fandom.

Really good story so far. Good thing Huey covered his mistake when he was asked about Webby or she would've been attaced next.

If only Scrooge knew waht happened in the past between Della & his great nephews, he wouldn't have let Della in the house. Eagar to find out what happens next.

A: The Trins parents are DEAD.

B. WHAT drugs? This is DISNEY for crying out loud!

C. Why the bleep don't they just TELL their unca Scrooge and have him put in rehab?

Oh no! Della's back! How terrible and ironic that she must've gotten for "good behavior" but she seems like she hasn't changed her ways at all! The suspense is building! The only critique I have is that it wasn't exactly clear that the previous chapter was a flashback. They were last seen with Donald and now they're with Scrooge. It was just a little jarring and I think Scrooge might've been a little more suspicious of Della than he was. But other than that, great chappie! Keep it up!