Nice emotion. The way you describe them Joren's pain was excusite. However the Chamber gives you nothing you don't deserve.

Oh, I like this. Was there going to be more? That would be very cool.

good good!

ooh...good. depressing sorta.

OMIGOD, that was a great ff. and finally somebody else who I understand, (well not really) but almost everybody who writes Tp ff is nice and does not cuss, it drives me insane! Oh yeah, if you ever get a reveiw from White Queen Rhyet, Dark Queen Rhyet and White Queen Rhyet are the same people, they make up me, evil and good, mostly evil though.

OMIGOD, that was a great ff. and finally somebody else who I understand, (well not really) but almost everybody who writes Tp ff is nice and does not cuss, it drives me insane! Oh yeah, if you ever get a reveiw from White Queen Rhyet, Dark Queen Rhyet and White Queen Rhyet are the same people, they make up me, evil and good, mostly evil though.

OMIGOD, that was a great ff. and finally somebody else who I understand, (well not really) but almost everybody who writes Tp ff is nice and does not cuss, it drives me insane! Oh yeah, if you ever get a reveiw from White Queen Rhyet, Dark Queen Rhyet and White Queen Rhyet are the same people, they make up me, evil and good, mostly evil though.

OMIGOD, that was a great ff. and finally somebody else who I understand, (well not really) but almost everybody who writes Tp ff is nice and does not cuss, it drives me insane! Oh yeah, if you ever get a reveiw from White Queen Rhyet, Dark Queen Rhyet and White Queen Rhyet are the same people, they make up me, evil and good, mostly evil though.

OMIGOD, that was a great ff. and finally somebody else who I understand, (well not really) but almost everybody who writes Tp ff is nice and does not cuss, it drives me insane! Oh yeah, if you ever get a reveiw from White Queen Rhyet, Dark Queen Rhyet and White Queen Rhyet are the same people, they make up me, evil and good, mostly evil though.

OMIGOD, that was a great ff. and finally somebody else who I understand, (well not really) but almost everybody who writes Tp ff is nice and does not cuss, it drives me insane! Oh yeah, if you ever get a reveiw from White Queen Rhyet, Dark Queen Rhyet and White Queen Rhyet are the same people, they make up me, evil and good, mostly evil though.

So sad...

Yike. My poor baby...*sniffle* my poor little Joren. Ok, I know he's evil and he got what he deserved, but I still like him. Although I liked hearing his death from Yuki's point, that was kinda cool. I think you did a great job of explaining the loss of faith in Joren's face too.

sooo sad, plz continue!

sooo sad, plz continue!

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