Hey! I was just wondering if you were going to keep up with this fanfic considering it's been almost a year since yoyr last update. Anyways, hope you can let us know soon, best wishes! xoxo, Mel.

I don't know how you do it, but you capture Flynn and Rapunzel's chemistry and dynamics so flawlessly, the only Tangled fiction I'll ever read is yours. This was such an amazing story. Well written and, even though I'm only assuming that chapter 20 is the end, well paced. I sincerely enjoy all the psychology you put into your stories, this one especially, as it really breaks down the characters into their basic issues and motivations. Your sentences are spot on as well, conveying a whole lot of character and emotion and growth in very minimal words.

Reading this was a very enjoyable experience and I can assure you without a doubt that I will continue rereading it in the future. Thanks for a wonderful story.

-stray

This really is such a beautiful story. It was expertly written, and you developed their relationship from total strangers into something infinitely more SO WELL. This is the type of story that I love, the ones that make me tear up, and have funny sensations in my tummy, and send shivers coursing from head to toe, and make my heart beat erratically in my chest, and at one point I just closed my eyes for a moment and prayed, 'Please, please, kiss her.'

I truly do love it. You're a fantastic writer, and I hope you update soon! Amazing job!

PHEW okay reading the comments it looks that your not finished! Good I was about to die over here lol. Flynn just has to make her his!

Oh my god..nice story but did I really just read this whole thing and they never had sex! oye. Not fair! I'm so pissed honestly. Or at least have her be curious about certain things..He's Flynn Ryder for goodness sake! It's what he's known for. He's absolutely irresistible and they had a lot of tension...oye he spoke about how he wanted to touch her. How he was turned on by her. I wanted to see how he planned on 'showing' her things didn't have to be sex. It's fine writing if it were labelled PG 13! and you could have skipped some of the unessential details with the girl that was easy. That part wasn't a good read anyways / One more chapter would make it perfect. A little more closeness and relief sexually. Sex doesn't have to be a bad thing it can be innocent and sweet. And especially innocent if he married her.

Making my way through this story and it's wonderful. "She laughed, because apparently being stoned made her regress in age to the point where pee was funny again". Your lines are gold. I might just have to read on and finish this tonight :)

I Really love tangled.
However, I did get a little offended by your use of the term "homeschooler" but I can't really get mad about it because it's the stereotypical idea if a homeschooler. Haha so im going to ignore that part and say how amazing this is so far. I really enjoyed the first chapter and am thoroughly interested in the next few. Great characterization, I feel like this is how the characters would actually be without the Disney influence. So good job on that and I can't wait to read more.

Darn it Flynn, you're such an idiot!

She's got him there. *shrug*

Oh Good God almighty...this is why people say never take candy from strangers. Remind me to add backed goods to that too. Ick.

I like how you portray Rapunzel, it's interesting.

While I should probubly be insulted by the craks at homeschoolers, it's very true that most homeschoolers -if not all- are shelterd from smoking no matter what the stuff actuly is.

This is absolutely beauteous and I loved every word of it.

Love this fanfic so much! Rapunzel is adorable and Flynn... I have no words that can accurately describe him. He's so complex! Please update!

Ohmygosh. This is possibly one of the best fics i have ever ever ever read. It's so fluffy! And sweet! And adorable! And heartbreakingly vulnerable! And Flynn! He's gorgeous! And I like the way you portray Rapunzel. So naive and wondering and curious and sweet and lovely it's appealing. The naiveness isn't cloying, unlike in some fics i read that when it's too much it's annoying. You've got that balance :) Do keep up the brilliant work! :)