i love these freestyle things you do, this was awesome, we like a lot of the same things :)

Yes! Yes! You wrote SiriusRemus! That's like... my two favourite things rolled into one! And, of course, the outcome was perfect. :)

I think this is my favourite piece out of your work so far :) Well done MSx

Awesome! Just a bit repetitive, though.

"And those icy grey eyes and muscled arms..."

I quite agree, Remus.