You stopped this at the most interesting part. Aw man...

It was really good otherwise. I enjoyed how you characterized Seishirou. Immensely. And the writing is smooth and enjoyable.

If you continued this you would make me veryvery happy.

i like the premise of this story and it is also entertaining. you use Hokuto as your main character to great effect. please continue. i want to know the rest of the story.

Update please!

my, my, I like this a lot. Please continue! Keep on writing this. I can so imagine them in such positions. You have to continue...

How could I not notice this was up? ::has Seishirou kill self::

haha! Watching Labyrinth was my childhood! And what makes a great movie even better? Adding TB characters! Ooooh I would just love to see Sei-chan in that leather outfit....*drool*

wow! fantastic concept for a fic!

really really good stuff (if my list wasn't full i'd even add you to my favorite stories v_v)

Wow! this is really good! I've never heard the names or whatever the charactors are from, so i don't know any of the backround, but this is great!

Hey, nice story! I sure can't write like that. It would be great if you would write more. Now I'm not quite sure how long ago you wrote this--could be 7 years ago for all I know--but however long ago it's still a great story ;-)

*dances around* Now why couldn't Sarah be like this? It's great! Keep writing!

More?

YAHOO!!(My new fav. thing to say...) New chapter!! Write more soon!! PLEASE!!! I love it! Please do SeixSu?? ;_; XD

hehe how cute ^^ leather and seishirou don't mix anyway xP thats more of a fuuma thing. I can't wait for more! wah, i wanna see subby.. ;-;

*smiles* nice! i was wondering how you were going to pull this off. ^_^ i'm also a labrynith fan (have hunted down the soundtrack enough to prove it too!!) and the premise of the plot sounds good so far. I'm looking forward to seeing how you manage this and it looks like it will be excellent! ^_^

yay! that's a nice & new idea, actually! wanna read mooore! pleeeeeaaaase, finish it soon or at least write another chapter ^^

best wishes
the mushroom***