|Reviews for The New Xiaolin Dragons|
| B.Jam 7/16/12 . chapter 3
Ohhhhhhh, can't get into this story. It's too... girly. Yeah, I'm a girl too but this is such a girly story. Crushes on boys you JUST met. First conversation between the group of girls is who do you like? The boys are even acting like this. "You like her!" So much forced pairing. Not my kind of story.
I like romance when handled well. This didn't take no time to head straight into the romance. I thought it would be cool to see new dragons to the temple but if all of the girls are just there to be paired up with the boys... That's freakin' annoying. It's like Young Justice all over again! I wouldn't mind one girl that grew to liking one of the boys over time but when it's instant "hello, my name is..." Now I like you, that's annoying. And it's ALL the girls!
I really don't believe that boys talk this way. Boys don't just sit around talking about their feelings, at least not so soon. They need to have a stronger bond before they start talking about their crushes and it won't be all "omg really" It'll be quieter and almost not as emotional. They'll react differently. They won't be as close to each other or look at each other in the eye. Also boys take more time to feel things. They might admit to being attracted to a girl but they won't look at her right away and say, "I like you and I want to be a couple." They take more time for all of that.
They don't talk about girls they want to get with that much and if they do it won't be a long conversation. It'll be more like:
"You trying to get with her?"
"Yeah she fine as hell."
Nodding head. "Yeah, she's decent. Good luck player."
THAT'S IT! They don't gosh over it like girls do. They don't try to set each other up with girlfriends. Girls do that. Not boys. And none of them have to be paired up with anyone. Having one couple like Kim and Rai is fine but Clay and Omi don't need love interest. It's Xiaolin Showdown not Winx Club.
Just the first two chapters made me want to slap these guys in the face and say, "BE A MAN DAMNIT! STOP BLUSHING AND TALKING ABOUT YOUR FEELINGS!"
| simsgal 6/28/12 . chapter 1
It was very nice. I like how the twin's powersare oppisit of eachother. But one thing, sound really isn't a naturaul element. Oh nevermind I Google'd it. ME LIKEY!
| Flareon1579 8/15/11 . chapter 9
I like the story. There is just one thing that is confusing. Twins are the same age, so Luna and Clair wouldn't be twins. Otherwise, I really like the story!
| Xiaolin Fan 8/14/11 . chapter 9
Aww that's so sad but cute update soon go raikim
| Xiaolin Fan 8/9/11 . chapter 8
Yay Luna I back hopefully there's raikim in the next chapter update soon
| sasuhina gal 8/9/11 . chapter 8
EHHHHHHHHHHHHH! i'm so glad this one was put up. i can't wait for the next one. go jake and luna!
| Xiaolin Fan 8/7/11 . chapter 6
Awesome chapter update soon
| wreakless 7/6/11 . chapter 5
haha oh my gods ,, i love this so far ! i love RaiKim and i think the Jake and Luna thing is starting really good : ) update soon please
| Sunshine5643 7/4/11 . chapter 5
Awe they confessed their feeling! I can't wait for more. Update soon
| XemlovezyouX11233 6/29/11 . chapter 5
Yzy was super update soon
| XemlovezyouX11233 6/28/11 . chapter 4
Yay raikim! Eww more please
| Sunshine5643 6/27/11 . chapter 3
I can't wait to see how thew new dragons do update soon!
| XemlovezyouX11233 6/27/11 . chapter 3
It was good I enjoyed it a lot id like some more raikim tho buts that's just me :) update soon
| Sunshine5643 6/27/11 . chapter 2
I like your story so far please update soon!
| XemlovezyouX11233 6/26/11 . chapter 2
Good chappie. Update soon. R u gonna bring in new bad guys too?