I finally beat this game today, and then I decided to see if there were any fanfiction for it. I must say this is really good and it works really well in first person. It made me chuckle because I was thinking the same things as 'Lake' when I was playing it. "Did he just insult him... Fearless? It looks like he's shaking in his boots from this side of the screen."

I do hope you'll continue it because I really do enjoy it. It makes me want to write my own story, about this really great but not very popular game.

This story is amazing. You should totally continue it. If you want. Not a lot of people know about ZHP.