   simba-rulz 5/24/03 . chapter 1Update soon! |
| Em 10/7/02 . chapter 1 This story is great, keep going. *Hugs Goten* |
| Illucien 8/20/02 . chapter 1 I like how this story is going so far! |
| Dbz Chicka 7/18/02 . chapter 1 Very interesting. E-mail me when you get the next chapter up at Lol, Trunks and Goten were very cute. But I'm a little confused...were Bulma and Vegeta talking to eachother with only thier minds? Word...o.o; I didn't know they could do that! And why were Trunks and Goten hanging upside down in a tree? Did Vegeta stick them out there to dry? Or were they just playing? lol, Well e-mail me PLEASE.
_v Peace!
*Dbz Chicka* |
| Neckomon 5/4/02 . chapter 1 Keep it up. I wanna read the rest! |
| Angel35 4/29/02 . chapter 1 That was very well done I hope you get the next chapter out soon _ becuase I can't wait to see what happens next in this story. |
| Interrobang 4/24/02 . chapter 1 I like this! update soon plz? |
| Toki1 4/22/02 . chapter 1 -
Cant wait to see what you'll write next:) |
| leelee3 4/12/02 . chapter 1 *snickers* Need...next chapter...now! _ *giggles* Ahahahahaha! Evil Shin...lying like that to those poor little innocent children...*snerk* Riiiight...
YAY! Mirai's in the next chapter! WOOHOO! Oh yeah! |
| Lupa Celeste 4/12/02 . chapter 1 *laughing* This is great! when are you going to put up more? And when's Trunks-sama gonna show? |
| Crawford 4/9/02 . chapter 1 SQUEE this is so cool, it has all my fav z-warriors(Sighs) Keep writing |
| Sailor Tawna-mi 4/9/02 . chapter 1 Hmm... interesting! I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
| reddrag80 4/9/02 . chapter 1 Thats the BEST story i've ever read! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! |
| Phoenix Skyborne 4/9/02 . chapter 1 *giggle* This is so cute and funny! I'd love to see more! _ |
| Professor Authordude 4/9/02 . chapter 1 ! Please update ASAP, Halo, this is mad funny! |
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