The distancing between them was written realistically and I love the characterization. Spot on! :)

Very nicely done. Eloquently exploring the stages of anticipating withdrawal, I really liked that. Shuichi was so wonderfully IC. Eiri as the usual intelligent, but emotionally disabled, fool (figure that one: "Intelligent fool"). I liked the 'coming together' even as they were just about to part. Cheers!

This is wonderful. Thank you, Xedra, for putting it on your faves list. I'd have missed it entirely, else. It captures Yuki's self-destructive impulses and Shuuichi's unique ability to counteract them beautifully. I hope you've never had to wonder what you were thinking, because it's a great little piece.

That was really good! I really liked it. Good job!

Just Jill

Since you asked... I really loved this! Going into my faves.

very interesting, I loved it, even though I got a litlle confused and lost track of the story in the middle, but overall, its a beautiful, emotional, well written story

You kept talking about silences and what they did that when reading this the fic itself felt like it was made of silence and as if all other noises were blocked off (Sorry random comments there but thats what it was like to read, which in turn gave it a unique quality). I'm glad I stumbled upon this one, it was deep and moving while being angsty and sad at the same time. Go you! ^_~

I have to say that this is hands down one of THE sweetest Gravi fics I've read. I LOVE your characterization; way too many people see Yuki as abusive to Shuichi, and forget that he does in fact love Shuichi.

SO cute, definitely going to my fav stories list.

xD This was so cute!!

that was great. (flicks cigar ash and pulls blanket high enough to cover chest). Mwahahaha!

beautiful

YaY - beautiful sap!! ^^ I loved it! *Slings on favs* Awesome job!

one of the best gravitation fics i'd ever had the chance to read ^_^. all the characters are so nicely in character, esp yuki. most fics portray him as a selfish bastard, and stop at that. well, he is that but .. he still is a cool, shuichi-loving, selfish bastard anyways X). adding this to favs. thanks for sharing.

This is fantastical. The tension up to when Yuki confronts Shu is great. I love it. Please write more soon!
~firedraygon97

I feel like crying. Not only because of the angsty goodness, but because the story itself is just so amazing I'm awe-struck. I envy you. >_> A lot, hehe. At first, I'll admit, I was a little confused, because of the choppy scenes - but I'm slow like that. After a little bit I understood, but that's just my own idiocy, hehehe. It was utterly amazing. I am deeply moved by this story. You're a large extremist, like me. When you write Yuki, you make him fiercly cold (even though there was wonderful fluff and inner turmoil with him!). But when I write him I make him too soft... >_> It's bad, hehehe. You're absolutely wonderful. I love how Shuichi wasn't just a litte whiner. I could feel the stress in him. It was remarkable. I applaude you. *hands you kudos*