This was a great story! I really like it! I look forward to reading more Othelloshipping fics from you. I am beginning to like this pairing a lot better than Pokeshipping. Good work!

Good work on this chapter as well! I wish they would've had Hilda travel with Ash instead of Iris. Oh well. Good job!

Good work! I have two Othelloshipping stories on my profile. Pokemon Black & White and Pokemon: Indigo League. I guess you can say my two Unova Ash to Ashley TG stories Ashley in Unova and Ashley in Unova: Rival Destinies have some Othelloshipping in it. However I have Casey in there as well. So I guess you can sort of say it's and Othelloshipping/Baseballshipping Combo. Good work with this story so far! I am going to read on!

I really liked this fic. I feel that your portayal of Ash was very good and you gave Hilda a very good and believeable personality. If only Hilda was in the anime, but Iris is okay.

Hey, this fic looks pretty good. I'm glad I decided to give it a go.

I look forward to reading more.

i liked that

I love Pikachu's reactions.

well this was the first and so far only Ash/Hilda fic ive read and i must say that i love this pairing, and i loved this story, i hope that there are more Othelloshipping fics in the future, and after reading this story, i hope that its the you that do them, because i thought you did a great job on it

Aww I just loved it _ I loved your ideas, and Cilan, Iris, Ash and Hilda were all in characters and everything. It was a great crackshipping story! :D

Oh lookie! I new shipping that I've never read yet! :D

I really like it so far! hehe. Can't wait to read more _

LOL! The meat! Goodness somebody needs to figure that out, cuz I know I saw people eating meat in one of the movies. And wow you've written 89 stories! You're AMAZING! :0

As good as it can get.

Well... not really. Good job anyway.

Excellent story Blu Rose. I applaud you on bringing some light to a new pairing like Othelloshipping. I too though that Hilda would travel with Ash in BW. Also the age thing is knida f*cked up. He's ten as of BW? WTH! Ash should be around 15 or 16 years old here, not TEN! Adter all the crap he went through with all those intense battles, the leagues, the Battle Frontiers, the crime groups, they make him ten! B*llsh*t!

Keep up the good work Blu Rose! Maybe make a sequel to this story explaining how Hilda and Ash make their relationship work. Like how they meet up in every city after their gym battles and have dates. Possibly even have them travel together for a bit. Then have them battle in the Unova League in the finals, who ever wins is your choice, but have them overcome the problem of losing to their love in the finals.

You could also make where Ash and his mom move to Unova, how you do it is up to you.

Well tere are some of my ideas for a sequel if you make one. Good luck in all endeavors!

I'm happy with the final chapter and can't wish to have better finish than this. But it kinda sad because it has to be the final chapter, so soon too. I like the story and the pairing and really like to have sequel of it. It's upto you though, but I really really like it and is hoping for a sequel. Thanks for this awesome , SHORT but sweet story just like you.

Wah! And I thought the first chapter was awesome but this one tops it for good. I like the shipping and really hopes this story continues. But it's upto you though. Great job can't compliment you enough and don't want to anymor now. Because gotta save some for the third chapter, Thanks.