Chs. 1 - 11

You've got a good story here. I noticed your statement that it was almost abandoned, which I think is a pity.

I like your premise, it's interesting. The presentation of Snape and his conflicts is well-done.

I *do* hope you'll re-consider and pick this up again.

Thanks for writing and sharing this.

Is this abandoned? I hope not. this is Great!

700! Good story so far. Snape sure isn't going to win father of the year with that attitude.

I wish you'd update. :'( This story is great!

:D yay update soon

A really great start! So few people are able to write Severitus and keep Snape in character, but you do an extremely believable job. I hope that you decide to continue this. Great work! :)

Hi, this story is great! But, not to nag, do you ever plan on updating it? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! This story is one of my favorites!

Oh, excellent! After so many rubbishy Snape-is-Harry's-Father stories, it's wonderful to come across one so well-written and intreguing . . . but then, I'd expect nothing less from you, O Gloriously Talented Author.

Interesting idea.

Good answer, Severus!

When I first started reading this I wasn't to into the whole Snape daddy thing. But your slowly warming to me.

You are a great writer. Your doing a good job at keeping charactors in charactor. If there is any OOC, it's barely there.

I can't wait to read the next chapter! Sorting hat...

I like your story. The plot doesn't seem very unique yet, but I'm sure that will change. I enjoyed your writing style and I hope you will continue this story.

This going to be updated ever? If it is, plz update! I'm really enjoying this!

I really really really like this story. And I was wondering if it was abandoned. Can you tell us if it is? If not, please please please update soon. Again, Great Job!

konnichi wa

This is a very good story, which is why it pains me to read that your last update was in 2002. Has this been abandoned?

Ha det

-Shan-