Very good. I like how you have Janeway's thoughts. It all seems very genuine and very much like how Janeway would have reacted. "If I even get close to figuring this man out during that time I'll be doing well." I loved that line!

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This is a very good story. I'd really like to see you wright a second chapter for it :)

This has really good insight! I totaly agree!