I would suggest putting the flashback it italics or differing it somehow from the rest of the story.

I didn't know that you'd left Fanfiction. I only started reading fanfiction last summer and I was completely in love with Boyfriend. I've read all the others as well, but this is Skirting Around a Scot and it deserves it's own praise. I think the best thing about it is it's romance, while being epic and playing a huge part, is not the dominant. Hayley loves her family and quidditch and the pub; it's not just a rom-com fic. I loved it and definitely will go to your blog to see your orginal work, if it's half as good as this I'd probably really, really like it. What is the blog link though?

Mmmnnnyah I've always been more of a walk into the sunset happy ending kinda girl ;)

OLIVER WOOD CURSE THE HEAVENS! If your gonna cheat on a veela like that with A McCoy, do it with dignity! Don't leAve her alone in a cold bed! Jebdhwjimnsheuiwjs. WTF MEN?!

is one of those birds, that awkward katniss Everdeen, Beatrice kinda chic. It's nice and irritating at the same time.
OLIVER YOU DO NOT KNOW HOW TO SMOOTH TALK! But based on the description, you should just kelp snogging. ;)
not angst when things just got sunny! Whyyyy

soo good! i wish you would write a sequel! such a great story!

I am so sad. Jack is so adorable, but I already know Hayley will end uo with Wood. Lame!
Love the story though!

I keep reading your stories, expecting I won't like it as I like the first story I read writen by you (I fell in love of "boyfriend") but that hasn't happen, and I couldn't be happier. I hope you succeed as a writer.

:) oh yeah, I also wanted to tell you how much I loved this story, having two younger brothers myself I found that I could relate to Heyley a lot. Oliver Wood has always been one of my fav. characters from the Potter world to read about and your story did him justice. :) another job well done..

Thanks,
I'mRandom

Molly-

I just wanted to thank you for the amazing pieces of writing you have put out over the past years. I will miss not seeing new fanfiction's by you but I understand that everyone has to move forward at some point or another. You are an amazing writer and I hope that one day I can reach your skill level. I will keep an eager eye out for any of your original pieces. Good luck, and once again thank you!

We will miss you,
I'mRandom

As I rule, I hate cliffhangers. I am the queen of cliches, and lack of plot, and of things happening "just because, OKAY?" There have been many story ideas I have had that I know that I will not write (at this point in my life) because they need to NOT have the perfect, rainbows and butterflies, wrapped up tight happy ending - and I wouldn't be able to do that for them. So thank you for this story - one that is not full of cliches, or bunnies and rainbows. For characters (AND romances) that are realistic and relate-able. And most of all, thanks for having an awesome "cliff-hanger" ending. I want to hate you right now, but I can't, because it was how the story needed to end. I won't ask you to write more for fanfiction - but I will say this. The day that you put down your pen, or close your laptop, is a sad day for literature. The second you get published, with your original stories, I will be pre-ordering your novels on Amazon :)

Ha! I love it :)

awwww, poor Jack :( He likes Hayley so much and she is both oblivious and in love-ish with Oliver. Love this story! Thanks for writing :)

Wuh oh :/ I think we know now why Bridget was acting a little fake towards Hayley...But Oliver Wood is HOT! haha. Love your OC! She is adorable and super funny :) Can't wait to read the rest of this story! Thanks for writing :)

was the beefy man and horsy woman vernon and petunia? OMG. haha i love this story so much :)