That was absolutely amazing. I think that could possibly be the best story in this fandom ever. It's the best one I've ever read. It just worked. It worked so well and it felt so real. It was simply spectacular.
Noli oblovisci mirabilis esse!

ohmygosh. one of the best master fics i've read so far. thank you so so so much for writing this; it was truly a genuine pleasure to read. i loved it all from start to lovely finish.

however! if there's one gripe i did have, it would probably have to be the prose style. the sentences in the descriptions and actions of the characters were really rhythmic, and kind of bland to read. i mean, they were entirely grammatically correct, but there wasn't much flow or poetry to the descriptions. they were very punctual and sorta like i guess uhh ... like robotic? but they definitely got the point across.

that's just some critique, though. c; thanks again for writing this, and apologies if there are typos! this is being written on my mobile.

oh. my. god. i've only just started this story, but i love it already. i only hope it will get better from here, ha ha.

Oh my goodness, I loved this so much! I just read the whole thing in one go, and it was fantastic. I cant type a whole lot, seeing as I am on my phone, but I wanted to tell you that this was simply amazing. :)

God, I loved this! Plotline and emo Master/Doctor really fitted in well together - when's the sequel? :)

Nouuuu it's finished BUT I have enjoyed this story very much!1 Thankyou for typing it up! Loved it very much and I look forward to future ficts by you ! xxx

Waouh! This chapter was exciting! Loved it! You managed to create a clever plot, really!

The scene of cooking was cute, but it's getting a little bit fluffy, I like it anyway! :) And, the Master really doesn't hear the drums anymore? How?

You're going to write a sequel! Wonderful! :D

Very good chapter! The Master's dream is going to be very important in your plot, isn't it? :)

Hasani certainly saw a lot of things in the doctor's mind, no? And this chapter was so sweet! I enjoyed it so much!

Plotless? No...I don't think so, and I'm sure you're going to create a Very good plot! But, why did the doctor tell the Master no to listen to Hasani, hum? Hope the answer will be in the next chapter! :)

Aaaaaaaargh! The Master trying to kill himself and the doctor who saves him! Very good, so what did you write in the next chapter...

That was a brilliant chapter! I loved how the Master killed Angels! And the idea of Tei and Koeren was really great!

gotta love that internal conflict :)