Nicely written. Most realistic.

You are one of my favorite authors on this site, because your fics are interesting, enjoyable to read, and very well written with excellent spelling and grammar.

Well done!

WHAOO! THAT WAS GREAT! I really enjoyed this story. It is so sweet. Well, you still one of my favs. Keep on going. Peace. AAML, BAAL, and TACL forever! Ash and Misty Love, Brock and Angelica Love, and Tracy and Carla Love! Yeah! I wish this happened for real. But it is not. Oh, well I LOVE IT. See-ya. :D

That was great! What other fics are you planning to write?

Nice story continue please!

vocabulary and very descriptive.

The last chapter was very well done. I do have to agree with you. We need more support for women who are abused by their husbands/boyfriends. It is a very terrifying experience.

dude!i just like love this story! please you must update ASAP! next thing ya know Misty will be pregnant, and the others engaged!you are an awsome writer!see ya!byebye!

I thought this story was great.

It read like a novel, one you couldn't put down.

I enjoyed this story, and can't wait for the end.

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! You finally got the newest chappie up! happy late bday! and great chapter:) I've been reading this story for a while, just not reviewing:(

It was hard to read. Happy belated birthday to you. When's the final chapter?

Aww that's just perfect! They're all paired off now...sweet. Please don't let the entertainment be TR doing a side show! Lol!

I'm glad Brock has a new girlfriend! What about Tracey?

Very cute chappie _

That was sweet. How old Ash and Misty on this fic? I'm thinking that they might be in their late teens since Ash proposed to her.

That was one emotionally wretching chapter. The characters weren't the only ones to cry. Thanks, I think I needed that just then.

What are they going to face next time one the next Island? I'll find out eventually.