WAAHHHHHH

Such Sadness :'(

...yet so beautifully written. :')

I can describe the book as a few heart attack moments and a few raid-the-tissue-box moments all mixed up into one big beautiful word pie.

Stellar job :D

As Usual, Be A U Ti Ful! (U Jus Gotta Imagine The Dashes Ther...Too Much Trouble To Put In Funczwae Stuffs)

Soooo Sadd...:'( Seriously! But, Awwww...Girffin :') So Beautoful!

Kepp On Keepin On, Love Ya $Tories Girl!

Oh my god PLEASE let tthat be a cure - I'm missing snarky, healthy Em. Plus- no offense- these depressing sick chapters, whilst important to show another side of her character, are getting to be a bit of a drag to read.

Hmmm, a new story you say? I may have to check that out ;)

*gasp* They ate her Nutter Butters?! You never eat someone else's Nutter Butters! Those things are so delicious! ...now I want one...

Bahahahahaha, not sure Griffin would be really happy at him being claimed as belonging to her like that...then again...he might...in some deep part of him that he refuses to acknowledge ;)

Hahahaha oh man, Griffin may be finally realizing that there is a part of him that likes being around her, particularly when he has so many other options and instead he goes to her bed to pretend to sleep

Awwww, she's getting worse :( And Griffin sleeps with her at nights to give himself piece of mind that's she's still alive I bet. HE CARES! haha

Careful girl! Don't got giving up on us now! Griffin would go do something completely reckless and get himself scrapped if you die!

...Andy? Alive? OMP IS HE A JUMPER TOO?! WHAT IF HE IS AND HE LEFT/FAKED HIS DEATH TO PROTECT HER?! Or...what if he was taken by the paladins and has been kept alive all this time being tested on? Or...is he a paladin and left like David's mom did?!

Things are getting desperate and interesting! Don't wait so long to update please! (not that I can talk :P)

Black Wolf-Dog

Depressing chapter.
Very emotional. I loved it. :)
I can't wait to find out what happens next.

AWWWW!

SADNESS AND CRYING HERE! WHYYY?!

KEEP ON KEEPING ON, GURL! Keep on keepin' on.

Keep calm and CARRY ON
Ah...F.U.N.

Yup! The chapter was funny but sad and confusing and now my head hurts 'cuz the whole time I was trying to work through that "If he doesn't care, I care, but if he does, I don't" stuff.

My brain hurts, lol.

BUT I LOVED IT! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

Lots of Love,
YOUR NUMBER ONE FAN (AND BESTIE)
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Oh my Primus! You updated! You're alive!

Woo! You're working on a book too? Sweet! I hope you finish it and get published!

Hahaha don't feel too bad, remember all those times it took me forever to update? Yeah, it happens to all of us, especially when life decides to get in the way :P

Hey! It's always good to better ones writing! And you know you're doing it when you enjoy writing more and more! Plus, that's what writing fanfic is all about right? Preparing oneself for writing books! Haha

...Yeeeaaaahhhh, I see Em and Griff have different definitions of persuasive ;)

Of course the moment you don't want to cough is the moment the body decides to have a hacking fit, especially if one is in a quiet room :/ And really, when trying to hold back a coughing fit, I feel like I'm about to choke and die XD

Stupid sickness always proving what one just says wrong ;)

Yup, guys will never understand women because women can never decipher their own thoughts/feelings and that of the men XD

Ouch Grif, ouch. Denial much?

...dude, the woman brain is confusing my woman brain!

Jeez Griffin, how can you not know what they're called? A little behind in movie-knowledge are we?

Aw Griffy, he's an honest drunk ;)

Oh yes, what a pair thee two do make...

awww, well at least she's finally admitting something to herself...now it's waiting on Griffin...we'll be waiting awhile XD

Amazing how the right guy doing the touching feels alright ;)

Awwwwww! His little sister?! Those slagging heartless paladins! KILL THEM ALL!

Ugh, talking about a loved one that's passed...it always feels good to remember the good times together but that damn lump always comes back :(

Awww, that was a great chapter! Definitely emotional. And I can certainly see the dramatic improvement to your writing. Much more description and emotion to it. Well done, well done! Keep going and keep improving!

Now I need to take your example and update my Transformers fic, at least chapter six is finally almost done! Haha.

Black Wolf-Dog

kladjf;lskdjfapoidsjfa;lskdjf;alsjdf;lskdjf;alskjd f;lakdsjf your writing always makes me wanna cry. I love the way you started out the chapter all light-hearted, but then it got really serious and they're broken and they need each other and I just alksdfjlaksjdflaewjladkjflak dj feels. your writing is going splendid. When you do publish your book I will pre-order it. Because I can't handle this level of emotion. writing. you're doing it right. pleeeeeeease keep updating!

Beautiful chapter. :)

Yay you finally updated! I love how they treat each other like brother and sister, it's hilarious. Good to know there's a soft side of Griffin ;D Please update soon, I love your story!

I love how they treat each other and act like they don't care when they do I just hide theirs another kiss soon please update soon can't eat to read more, cheers :)

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Please update ASAP !

hey carry on or I'll go all kinds of crazy on your arse