that was great, besides her beating

Lovely story! (:

Aw. :D

I love this ! The way Sasuke remains in character & how Salura's determination to keep him to her. :D

Really, really well done. Despite the brevity of this story, you revealed enough of them for me to become emotionally involved with them, and I was rooting for them all the way. You kept them in character, with Sasuke's warped self-righteousness and Sakura's stubborn streak. I loved how Sakura refuses to accept anything less than iron-clad resolve from Sasuke, even if his hesitation stems from his desire to keep her safe, which has always been one of the hallmarks of his character.

Thanks for sharing, you talented, talented creature. Another excellent story.

This was so beautiful.

I loved it!

oh man... this is just so inspired.

Nice story! Very interesting read. :o

T.T sniffles. I loved that last line, the whole never-late thing. Sniffle

I also happen to enjoy this universe! I would love to read more of your works about it. Is "it's never as hard as you think" part of this universe as well? :D

Awww... Adorably sweet! I think I liked everything about it. I'm sorry, I know that's not the best review, but you write so well! I really liked the description at the beginning that likened Sakura to a butterfly. I thought it was achingly lovely. I like how Sasuke needs her so much. I love her determination and the unshakeable faith she has in him. I like it all.

Love love love this!

It's so poignantly BEAUTIFUL!

A multichapter on this perhaps? Pls?

If not, just know that it really is BEAUTIFUL.

I truly admire u!

More power and more beautiful stories in the future!

aww.. great story i loved it

LOVE! XD

thanks for sharing! :D

Q_Q NOOOOOOOOOO, WHO DARES HURT MY SAKURA-CHAN? (cries) I adore the girl, like, to death. It's amazing. x_x

(smiles) I'm glad that Sasuke manages to get his words out in the end. They're not in the dark anymore.

I can't understand a thing, but I am going to reread it a thousand times anyway.