|Reviews for Darkened Road|
| acetwolf94 4/16/13 . chapter 31
| acetwolf94 3/11/13 . chapter 30
I LOVE IT! Please add more!
| Guest 12/21/12 . chapter 25
I can't wait for the next chapters. Love the intensity that you are able to achieve and the slow but steady build up. Hope the new chapters come soon.
| Guest 12/21/12 . chapter 23
Using Kane's name when you mean James. Just a small error but since Kane is an enemy it is confusing
| AlexandraSterling41 6/4/12 . chapter 16
| bummblebee73 3/30/12 . chapter 2
HI I Love Anita Blake Novels and i love your Spin on it i really do, i've been going through a anita withdrawel but this has definitly made it better! but i only have one little sugestion and error correction...Jean cluade in Chapter two you have him referre to her as Mon Ami ...when Anita's pet name is Ma Petite(my little one) I dk if you had that on purpose but yeah..just wantedto let you know in case you didnt know (:
| Kala-Warrior18 2/22/12 . chapter 14
I...LOVE...THIS...STORY! I hope you update soon!
| Mela 12/18/11 . chapter 12
This is an extremely well-written story. There is a good balance between dialogue and description. You are very talented! :)
| aniw8i 9/24/11 . chapter 9
Keep updating hun! I love your story!
| camp30 7/1/11 . chapter 3
OHH, Great chapter! I think you capture Jean Claude very well:P
It might be interesting to devolop some feelings for her on Jean Claude's part for Mizelle, and some jealousy on Anita's part, I don't know but I'm intruiged.
I also like the part with Ash, and I like that I know what she looks like (btw very interesting how she looks)!
| camp30 7/1/11 . chapter 2
Good chapter! I like the flash back it was well written:P Some good dialouge too, some snark which I enjoyed!
| falicia 6/30/11 . chapter 1
wow. MIZELLE! coolios. :p Did you come up with the name or was it Anita's? i think your doing fine and it's good so far 0.0
| camp30 6/26/11 . chapter 1
This is good! I assume that it is a one shot right? Since when I went to review it it said "Review story."
One suggestion though I would break it up into paragraphs, its just me but I have a hard time following it with it all together.
You should do more chapters this has potential! The languge that you use here is really quite good. And I like that you made your OC (at least I think she is OC, I only read the first five books of AB) a water elemental. I also liked the part about her father.
I wish I knew what she looked like and how she came to know Anita. That's why I think you should do another chapter or several. But its up to you as the author, this was good and I hope you continue it!