tumbr lead me here... what the fuck I just read? I really want to kill myself.

NOOOOO i want izuna to come back i dont want him to be dead! T_T :O

Good plot, but it just isn't believable. No way could Madara be this weak. Yes I understand that it is fanfiction and it is your story, but you need more evidence to back up why he is like this. Madara would cry blood, sweat and tears before he would let Hashirama do this to him AND he'd just kill him. Uchiha's are strong, they're aren't weak. So many times people portray them as being weak, but we must remember that Madara summoned the fox and would kill without a second thought.
Honestly, the first chapter turned me away.
I can't say this is a bad story because it's not, but it just isn't believable in a critical perspective. Of course, you have many fans that love the story so...

-Yamiga

the overall plot was really good, I liked the way you formulated the story. But, there were some grammar errors which made it hard to understand at some points. Some things were just so cheesy it seemed almost out of place and a little too "lovey-dubby" for this story to be a serious one, more like a quick read rather than a fully detailed and elaborate story. Some parts were written so quick that i didn't get a concrete or vivid image of them, or just couldn't see reason behind them. But, the story was good, and I really did enjoy reading it. I'm glad you made the source of Hashirama's insaness a sickness, because we all know how lovable of a hokage he is. It would've been better if you explained Madara's feelings towards Izuna and revealed if he ever figured out that Izuna had never hurt him, rather than just saying he mourned for Izuna.

An interesting twist you've put on these 4 characters, I really enjoyed it. I like the the stories you write, they're all very good and very original

Do an epilogue of mutual HashiMada please? Oh, and I can't find this story on adultfanfiction. Link it to me?

Such a sad ending! But i enjoyed it :( well done :)

fucking awesome :D

TT_TT SO SAD. I'm sorry I didn't have time to review it all, but some day, I will make it up to you!

It was a sad story but I was glad they were able to become friends in the end. I also think you should put a lemon in. I also tried to find this story on adultfanfiction but couldn't Thank You.

I would like an epilogue (and a lemon) too

this entire story pissed me of... Though not because I didn't like it ;-) at least the ending sort of made up for some of the angst. Epilogue? yes please!

I loved this fic so much, I never expected hashirama and madara to become friends afterwards with all the drama but sorta glad it did turn out like this. I will always have a love for Hashi no matter how evil/sick he might be. I was so glad that madara didn't go fully physcho and kill people, as long as he heals, s'all good :)

Wondering they ever do turn out to be together.. Surely hope so

Epilogue? Haha yes that would be great! You (must) if you want, make an epilogue :3 keen as a bean

So... Tobi didn't tell Madara about how it was Hashirama in the transformation jutsu as Izuna -.-

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Meeeeh Izunaaaaa! *heartbroken sobs* Bad Hashi, look what a mess you've caused!

I seriously can't wait to know what's gonna happen, so curios! :3

Everything is so sad I just want to go cry in the emo-corner...or jump into this fic and give Madara a huuuuge hug cus he's seriously in need of one *sniff*

Hashirama you bastard, Y U so evil? I can understand that your feelings for Madara makes you confused but turning him against Izuna is JUST SO DAMN MEAN D': he has no one now!

God I love this fic and all its angsty sadness! You've done great job! :3