DarkAngel048 said you wanted reviewers so here I am! ; I like the idea behind this and I think it's interesting. I think your writing style could use a little improvement; your sentences are really long! I have this problem too sometimes and an easy way to fix it is to read the story aloud. Breath only at the end of the sentence and if you get to the end and you're gasping for breath it's too long! Also, once, you said 'should of' and the English major in me needs to point out that it's 'should've'. Otherwise you're doing fine and I hope to read some of your other stuff soon. :

finally a new chapter, and man I have to say, I wonder what's happening to Danny, and also man his parents are idiots, they don't care enough to look towards the roots of the problems, man are they stupid, well either way, later, and have fun writing :)

please update, this is a very good fanfic, and I would really like to know what is going to happen next :D well that's all, later :D

Cool start! ;)

Great fic and chapter! Can't wait to read more!