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Randomreader 4/27/12 . chapter 13
It's kind of rare to find a story that you genuinely adore, and I feel like I am just settling on mediocre stories more and more frequently. This is honestly one of the best inuyasha stories I have ever read, and it just keeps getting better the more of it that I read! Amazing work, and I love you.
Randomreader 4/26/12 . chapter 5
Your story is seriously awesome. It reminds me a lot of How to Kill Me, by witchygirl99, if you haven't read that you definatly should, although I don't think it's finnished. Any your awesome keep up the good work, and I love you.
foxfaceish 4/13/12 . chapter 18
YaY I finally had time to catch up :3 I loved it. I love the set up for the next few chapters :)) keep up the good work!
The Tuneless Siren 4/11/12 . chapter 18
This chapter was so good! I loved it! It's cool that the hunters have their own little town out in the middle of nowhere! It's also cool to learn more about Sango's family! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
angelstar 4/8/12 . chapter 18
cool chapter, loved it !

keep it up and update soon
Jingyee1511 4/8/12 . chapter 18
Ahh, an awesome job. D For chapter 17, Sesshomaru's exasperation and being placed on loudspeaker was plain epic. D Great job there- being transferred from Sango to Inuyasha then Miroku (and his tone throughout it all, wow! )and finally hearing Kagome and getting the ultimate realisation. D Can't stop laughing imagining Sesshomaru's expression. For chapter 18! Your description of how Sango felt about it all was very realistic- I can feel that it is trying, having everything you thought you knew being marked with question marks. ._. And the scene where Tsukiyomi and Kagome jointly vanquished the salamander demon was wonderful! The idea that one can take on the world if they believe in themselves... Their priestess power aside, that mentality, portrayed with that light that did away the demon... *thumbs up*

Great job! Thanks so much for the chapter update! D
Anonymous Reviewer-T 4/6/12 . chapter 18
You did awesome on this chapter! I really like how you made everything flow

Overall, I really enjoyed this chapter, and not just because I kinda helped, even though it does make me feel a bit special _

Thank you so much for the honor!

I liked the part about the salamander demon - I had fun picturing what it looked like in my head

Thank you so much for this chapter! I really hope Inuyasha and the others make some headway into the Naraku business, and I'm glad that Sango feels better.
kawoosh 4/3/12 . chapter 18
Ooooh, great chapter!
bee1313 4/3/12 . chapter 18
good job! luved the chappie!
Yang of Yin 4/2/12 . chapter 18
Hahahaha! Kagome is so funny. I really like how she'll be able to use her powers now so that is cool. A really good chapter, the hunter town sounds really cool and I can't wait to read more about it!
little25victor 4/2/12 . chapter 18
Jinenji! Heehee.

So..., Sango has some family history. I wonder what did happen to her parents? And the Shikon no Tama finally makes an appearance(sort of). I'm still not sure who might have helped Naraku. I don't even have a guess. Meh.

I await your next chapter.
rite4fun 4/2/12 . chapter 18
I can honestly say I didn't see Sangos background coming to haunt her. Very nice twist. Interested to see if that means anything in later chapters. Also, it was nice to see that Miroku and Sango have some type of relationship.

I'm assuming Koga will be making an appearance. Either him or Shiippo. They are the only characters I could see you bringing back.
TheRealInuyasha 4/2/12 . chapter 18
!aj, boj dooG .kcab uoy ees ot dalG

(I guess my friend's habit rubbed off on me.)
Thou shalt not fear 4/2/12 . chapter 18
awed
Saria Forest14 4/2/12 . chapter 17
Oops. Not kangaroo. Manga lol.
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