hey, i think you're story is going pretty well so far, but i don't understand why eli is being so rude to jesse and grace.

update update update update! SON! i'm dying here... hurry hun..

great work by the way ;)

I really like this story! You're an awesome writer, too. Is Eli really going to undress Corrie? PLEASE hurry with the next chapter... I'm dieing to find out what's going to happen!

Hey,

Please write more! I like the fact that Eli is meeting someone.

it was cute, but what's wrong with Eli and Grace being together, and what's wrong with Jessie being gay?

my gosh eli is so mean to jessie and please don't make her and Jessie gay.

Hey, just wanted to say i really like your story so far. I love Eli :-)