OMG YOU NEED TO FINISH THIS! I CAN'T CONTAIN MY FEELS RIGHT NOW.

-_- -sighs-

Ha! i have to do that the next time i get the stomach flu "mother forgive me" all over her bed :D so evil me!... i likes it im gonna continue reading :D i loves cherick for the simple fact that the mpregs are so cute

This is too heartwarming and and.. no words to describe it. i totally thought charles died in the previous chapter, but this last chapter is such a relief, and have a very good ending to it. n i really like the name 'Huette'.

a really lovely story... some part bitter, most part sweet... I really loved it... I really love the twins;-)

That was an amazing story! It was beautifully written and I'm just so glad Charles stayed through to see his two adorable children! I can't wait to see Galen and Huette grow up. I wonder what Galen's power is. I'm going to read the sequel now!

A wonderful story. I nearly cried when Charles finally woke up!

Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I loved it so much!

You're so amazing at portraying emotion through the characters.

You're fantastic! So fantastic, I can't even.

:)

Mpreg is one of my favorite dirty little secrets and you've pulled it off in this fic magnificently. I loved the pacing of the plot and the interactions of the characters - great work!

I have to say, your English and grammar are bad..English must not be your first language for it to be so off and you need to get a better beta if your current one doesn't see how structurally, grammatically incorrect your overall story is.

Also, your whole story didn't really have a POINT nor storyline/plot behind it, except, for the Mpreg..It's just bad writing.

HI!

I read all his fiction in one night, or early morning to be exact!

I loved every piece of fiction, the foundation had terioa pregnancy. I think the two together so beautiful. They would make great parents, Charles Mom and Erik Dad.

I have this odd couple, Hank and Alex.

Each scene is perfect and I was sorry when Charles was shot and still had babies. I would not have controlled, would have killed everyone.

I like how they met, makes me wonder how they got close, they created a friendship and then love. I would appreciate if you tell me.

I loved the twins. What is the power of the boy?

Favorites.

Sorry my English is not my native language.

Thank you for your lovely story! I really liked it! Epilogue was great, too! I would love to read more XMFC from you :)

First of all when I was reading chapter six and I saw my name and comment, I was like :O omg you read my review and commented. I was so happy.

Seccond I loved the ending, it so good, happy ending are always good. I thought it was really really good, I am no longer sad :)

and last I would like to thank you for writing such an amazing fanfiction about my fave couple and fandom. Your fanfiction was so good I waited in anticipation for the next chapters. You are really really amazingly great at writing. Don't stop.

Your are amazing xxx rose :D

This is really the ending XD haha a very beautiful story!

First of, I really liked the story (I read the Epilouge too).

But I feel like I should tell you, that you should stop using Google Translator, because there're mistakes in you german scentences. I know I probably sound mean, but I thought I should tell you. One, I would have been 'Wir brauchen dihc', as in 'Ich brauche dich', because 'Sie' is only used towards strangers or persons that have a higher standing then you - I don't expect you to know this, but you wouldn't adress your spouse with 'Sie'. Second 'Bitte aufwachen' is somewhat correct, but it would rather be 'Bitte wach auf' because he personally adresses Charles. I really don't mean to be offensive or anything, just that's a real grammer mistake and since I figured you wouldn't know, I just wanted to tell you.