This story was really, really good, I loved it! I was looking for a story like this, one that just focuses on Ed, Al and Winry's relationship, and with hints of EdWin, it was truly a great story. The characterization was flawless and you're writing skills are great too.

I really loved the scene when Winry hugged Al, and he told her he couldn't feel the hug, and so forth, but that was just beyond sweet!

I really liked this story! Well-written, the characters are very much themselves & much real people, & I love where there's additional backstories like this, that believably flesh out what could have been happening in the actual series.

This was a good story:) It was well paced and i didn't notice any mistakes. The characters were not OOC either. Good Job:D

Cute! Loved it!

ooooh! i SO loved this!