Oh gods. Amazing. So disjointed and tangled, which is appropriate, since I'm assuming this is while Zia is in her enchanted sleep. A lovely poem :)

That was amazing. I loved it. :) I always felt so bad for Zia, losing her family, then Iskandar, and then finding out that the thing that ruined all that is back and ready to destroy her. I think she's meant to destroy the thing in the end.

This was really, really good. Choice of words were perfect, and tere's something about the structure that gives the impression that she's not in the right state of mind...really, perfect for something like a nightmare. It felt like a mental struggle just because of the layout. Fantastic job. You are a great writer :)

This isn't free verse. It's poetry, but not free verse. Free verse involves bolding, underlining and italics, as well as several other stuff. However, this isn't bad for poetry at all.

Whoa... that was deep. Very good.

Wow. That's kind of creepy... but really well written. Keep writing poems!