you asked for a review, and for once, I'm following orders. great poem, I adore it. I especially love the last two lines "No matter how hard I am called, I'll stay beside you" so true, so true...she promised! anyways, great job!

Truly exprssed Keeichi's feeling.

Wonderful job, you've got real poetic skill. How I wish I could have a relationship as strong as that

of Keiichi and Belldandy. Keep on writing

That was so kawaii!I had my mouth wide open with drool hanging down from it when i finished! Gross, i know!

Short and sweet I rather liked it. A note to the author if you have only watched the ova you really should check out the manga at least in my opinion it is far superior.

[sniffling] that was beautiful but why is it under the

cattogory '' Oh My Goodness''?

aah! that's so sweet!

Er.. Sorry to tell u dis, but Skuld is 12 years old and loves ICE CREAM not SAKE, Urd is the one that loves alcohol and uses it as a source of power when Yggdrasil fails _ Nice poem btw.

GREAT SWEET TOUCHING POEM! i luv it! congrats! keep going!