Gorgeous imagery. I loved it! You can really feel the aching emotion he has.

Oh. My gosh. This is EXCELLENT! So much attention to detail. It's just AWESOME! You are such a talented writer. The metaphor to photography was super-smart.

Keep it UP!

AmMiE

Beautiful. You captured Akiha wonderfully, and I absolutely loved this. Of course, I absolutely love you as well. .

_ cool story. I liked the ending.

Wow... this was amazing. You are an excellent writer. You hooked me in the first sentence. This is so beautiful. It's definitely going on my favorites! D

KATE

nyah... write some more! i love HanaKimi also!

wow so cooL! it poetic in a sense, this is the first hanakimi fic i've read and i agree, there should be more.

:D are you going to write more?

I really enjoyed reading this; when Tin mentioned finding Hana-Kimi fic in the misc section, I was delighted and immediately went hunting, and what a reward was delivered! I love the way you've blended thought and action for Akiha in this, as well as past conversation and observation. It's lovely, and thank you for writing it.

this is a really lovely piece, very touching and well-written. write more! :)

oogah, this is good :D and yeah, there are no HanaKimi fics! (I mean, I haven't stumbled across any so far.) Keep on writing :)

KDFJKSDLF AKIHA! ::dances:: :D :D :D love it nah! But you know thaat :P