This is quite possibly the sweetest thing I have ever read ever. I don't know why, but it does seem very characteristic of Mordin to be so careful and patient and thoughtful with someone he cares about, especially with someone undergoing the amount of stress Shepard is. I liked the reference to the hips being a particularly sensitive area, too. Of course Mordin would know that. :)

And now I want to know just how Shepard will return the favor. Hah. Gives me this idea that perhaps Salarians find intellect a turn-on, and in her attempt to seduce him she recites scientific lingo she memorized from the extranet. XD The more I read Mordin/Femshep the more I kinda fall for them. This was an enjoyable read. Thanks for writing.

It might sound cliche, but I think you captured the essence of mordin's character wonderfully. How he can be rediculously logical, but also tender in the same sense. This is the first story i've read where sheperd and he were paired as a couple, but in an odd way, I really dig it _

Yeah, he is so sweet...

I asking myself why there is just few story about them... I know that they arent perfect paring but which is?

This was a sweet story. Great job.

It is an odd couple, but you wrote this so well it seemed as though it were a perfectly natural part of the game.

Super cute, and awesome job capturing Mordin's voice! :)

This was such a great fan fiction of these two! Like the others who have reviewed, I was disappointed to learn that Shepard cannot romance Mordin, but at the same time, it's understandable.

But the way you write about them, it just seems so perfect! It seems like this would happen in the game!

You do a marvelous job at writing! :D So please keep on at it!

I played this game with my brother watching as fem Shepard, and we were both hoping that my character would romance Mordin, and we were so disappointed when it didn't happen. This gives me hope, because it would be so like him to refuse a relationship citing a distraction from the mission.

Thank you so much for writing this.

Awwwww That was sweet :3 *thumbsup*

I am really glad someone is finally writing some fic about these two. I totally tried to romance him (after Garrus ;)...naturally) and was sadly disappointed that I could not :(

Loved this!