Aw so good. "Squall didn’t want to be him anymore than a snowball wanted to take a scenic vacation to hell" Brilliant! Keep up the awesomeness.

Blood Lady

That was really sweet.

this was so cute! at first i thought you were going to have cara not love zell, but now i am happy that that line of thinking was the wrong one! Zell is just so awesome, its weird though how he likes to rhyme with his name alot...

Aw, how sweet. You know, I got really teary when they sang that song in Moulin Rouge. :)

lol thank you for r&ring (i gusse thats how you would say that) my story. I love this one to! lol _ i am going to upload a new chapter and i think it would be nice if you continued this one to. _

What a nice story. Do they run away together after that, or do they leave eachother?

Hi, Dagger! No, I wouldn't dream of flaming you, don't worry. _ I'm gonna give you some constructive criticism.

First, it's waaay too short! And therefore it's hard to really get into the story. Sure, some stories are best short, but this isn't one of them. Make it longer, and give the characters time to deal with emotions and situations, because the way it is now, the plot's moving forward way too fast.

Second, always use only three periods in a row. I see you've at some places in the text used four or five.

Let me know if you'd like some more advice!

This fic would be great, if you'd just put some more effort into it. Read books and look at how they're written.

/ Anjo

Katie-

Ah, I LOOOOVE Moulin Rouge! This is so cute! Aw...::singing:: Come what may...I will love you, unil the end of time... Good job! :):)

Great fic! Be careful with spacing. . .it's noce to read a fic where Zell is't gay, those drive me CRAZY! Well, keep writing!

awww, this is very sweet. is it just me, or are there a lot of great zell x girl with a pigtail fics today? _ anyway, keep up the great work. will there be other chapters? if there are, i suggest that you skip lines between dialogues...it'll be easier on the reader to know when zell or cara is talking. well, bye for now. i hope to read more fics by you in the future. _