poor guy! this just ahve to rip his ego to shreds :)

Oh dear. I think the moral here is "Be careful with what you wish for".

Yuuno's gonna have a hell of a time dating Hayate. Vita will probably try to kill him too. :P

That was wierd, i was expecting more of a punch line in the end. Instead I'm just going to assume this happens shortly before the events in your Hayate/Vivio fics.

I'm already taking bets on who Hayate will leave Yuuno for.

I'm thinking vita. vita is hot

ja ne

"Lesbian's training wheels" still makes me laugh. And the whole fic was just funny, with Yuuno's rant and Hayate caught between sympathy and how funny the whole thing is. I do like the changes you slipped in, though-I noticed her face being carefully blank, and the bit in Yuuno's thoughts where he remembers her being relieved when Shamal broke up with him (though he ascribes the wrong reason for her doing so), so that a reader paying close attention will realize that Hayate's been working towards this for some time and didn't just ask him out because she's interested in Carim and needs the practice.

I laughed so hard reading this, well done!

Definitely loved the line about lesbian's training wheels. And Hayate's reaction.

The subtle action's to Hayate worked well, as otherwise, it would seem weird a bit. Unless of course that was Hayate's plan. But she never seemed to be cruel.

Anyways, I really like this fic. Though it is funny how he does get the girl when he is being whiny. Thanks for the humorous story.

It could be worse.

He could have dated Uno and Arf and lost them to...uh...Tre and the Lieze sisters.

Yeah.

You have to write a sequel to this one.

Preferably one in which Hayate dumps Yuuno for Vita, and Yuuno ends up with Zafira.

This is absolutely wonderful! I was laughing so much while reading this. Poor Yunno! Awwww 3

Thanks for another great one shot! :)

Still getting that NTR distant ending vibe...

Y'know what ferret? just aim for heterosexually proven girls like Lindy or Leti :P

I'm still not exactly sure how we both won and lost that bet "

Anyways, I was both amused and sympathetic at the same time. The changes helped and hopefully since Hayate had pre-existing feelings for him, she isn't unsure of her sexuality and won't dump him for Carim later on.

Good job :)

Nice addition at the beggining, though, still a little too subtle, but it did took down some of the 'WTF' moment at the end.

Still difficult to get past the "Lesbian's training wheels" remark. X