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Someone2003 7/24/11 . chapter 1
I usually don't bother with fics this short, but the summary had me too interested to ignore (not to mention Tala/Julia fics of any sort are so rare). I'm so glad I read this, because it's a quality little fic! Julia and Tala were definitely in-character, and nothing felt forced (huge plus!). Their banter was cute and fun. The penny wish at the end was a charming touch.

Thanks!
Ms. Controversy 6/28/11 . chapter 1
Hey I thought this was really cute! I know it's probably a one-shot but I think you can really make something out of this! It would turn out to be a great story, especially with your writing style! Consider it.

xoxo Ms. Controversy
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