This was cute. I like the personal insight into Armeria's thoughts, and I'm guessing you staged it for right at the end of chapter one. Very cute idea.

You also have a very good writing style, but you seem to skip a word in several sentences. While it isn't too horribly noticeable, it did make me pause to re-read a sentence a few times. I would just be careful of that in future writing, and wish you good luck. :)

this is really good love it. so cannot wait for more.

That was very good it seems like you are going to make another chapter out of it I would absolutely LOVE to read more