This fic...is amazing. Seriously. You really fleshed out Zaknafein's character, and I loved the relationship between Malice and Zaknafein. I also loved the way you wrote Nalfein, I actually liked him better than Zaknafein in this fic The only question I would have is exactly what Realm is Zaknafein in now?

*Bursts into laughter.* I read the Entreri one first then I HAD to read this one too. I must say that you're a wonderful writer and I love your stories. As for the pairings *wicked/hentai grin.* make Zaknefein suffer and do both. *Cackles.* It'd be worth it just to see the Afterword not to mention a great read. *Begins to drool.* Anyway, loved it and want more.

* Haiiro Hitosu *

OOh, you finished! Sorry I haven't been here for awhile...I love this. It ends all happy with Nalfein. *points* I knew it! Zak must always be somewhere-Yay! I thought you'd forgotten him, but nope! *dances off to read the story again* Whee! Thankes!

o slash fic. Go for it! I don't know if you're taking sugestions, but I think Love triangle with both Entreri and Jaraxle would be fun. And maybe see the look on Drizzt's face when he finds out.

My vocabulary always fails in attempting to write reviews for this story. I guess i just can't express my happiness for it. Okay, I like the plot here. It makes me happy. And relationships...and with Malice and Zak. And...yeah. Okay, I like it a lot.

Ooh...trickly. But I thought jar was the third son. OH whatever, I like it. So happy Jarlaxle is finally in! *huggles mercenary* Yay!

Oh bugger...*ties self to chair* There, so now I will not jump up and down in happiness. It's so...interesting! In a nice way...so happy. And the way this whole chapter/intersection thing was just...in character. Yay! *does happy dance, breaking ropes* Thank you Anya! You be god!

Cool! They finally did it! Been waiting forever and ever...and ever. Ecstaticness...sooo happy about the new chapter.

Okay! I'm sorry! I haven't reviewed! *sobs* I am a baaad person. I just love this story though! And I am still neglectful and say nothing. But do not ever EVER stop, for the wonder and glory exceed my wildest dreams of fanfiction. I loooove it!

*sighs* I cannot stop grinning...damn. This is all your fault. But it's happy and subtle at once. Yay! S'kaerik gets to look at the books...I state obvious things! Yay! But all in all, I like the plot, like the characters, like where both sections of this story are going. Great work! *sounds cliche*

whee! Hmmm...never...look...in...the eys. Okay. I think I got that. good advice, like the description of dying. eh, me like the stuff in Sorcere. Nalfein be coool! *runs in circles* INTERSECTION! I SEEE IT!

Dammit Anya. You had me grinning madly for this whole intersection. And they don't even talk! DAAAMN YOU! But is happy...I love it so much. I grin some more...I am unable to stop...aaaaaaah!

Oooh...I back away, is scary. But very drow, leaving the child like that. Yes! characterization! And battle scene be good...*insert more praise, about ten minutes worth* I am tiiired...soorry.

*jumps in delight* I love these intersections better than the sotry, am I not a pitious creature? But the story is excellentish! Likey with Saole being all scary and femaleish...(hopes she is getting the characters right) Yes! I love it so much!

I apologise for not having commented on recent chapters on drowfic - been insanely busy. I'll just compile my thoughts - I doubt you want a review per chapter (although it appears that some people believe you do).

Part 4 (Melee-Magthere) is probably my favourite chapter so far. I throughly enjoyed the example of the speech that Zaknafein gives to students - completely character-typical. One minor thing though - I had thought that drow entered the Academy at the age of twenty-one, not twenty-five. Hardly an important point though.

Intersection: “It would be your fault if I end up a senile, withered heap trembling on a bed somewhere in a dark corner.” I attempted to imagine Jarlaxle as a senile, withered heap. Unsurprisingly, I couldn't manage it. The bantering between Jarlaxle and S’kaerik is really enjoyable to read, and S'kaerik's encounter with the dwarves also.

Part 5 (Malice). Still intrigued by the names of some of Matron Daermone's daughters. And I have to agree with sl smith - the description of Malice is excellent - and far longer than RAS ever gave her. I hope the Zaknafein/Malice relationship will be expanded in later chapters.

Emma.