|Reviews for Ashendale|
| Coranai 6/23/12 . chapter 16
Glorious. Absolutely glorious. Sorry it took me a while to getting around to reading this chapter. I don't know that I have much specific to say, though. You continue to capture Richard perfectly, and it was glorious.
| Shadowfax311 6/23/12 . chapter 16
This is the best version of RICHARDS PAST I HAVE EVER READ! It is incredibly well written and thought out. I very much appreciate that all of the ideas are well rounded and nothing is left hanging without answer. There are almost no errors in grammer and spelling which definitely makes this easier to read. I also like how you have portrayed Richard's character, his strange humor and silliness is very well written.
Thank you for writing this, I hope you continue it soon,
| Nadreth 6/6/12 . chapter 16
Awesome as usual, I can't wait for more.
| Maltrazz 6/3/12 . chapter 16
Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next!
| Heavenly Faye-Faye 5/31/12 . chapter 16
I only found your story a few hours ago, but I managed to finish all sixteen chapters already. I impressed myself with that...
Anyway, I wanted to tell you that while nothing but the LFG comic creators itself can make something with Richard and have it considered perfect, this story is a damn close second. No lie, this is awesome! I only wish I could italicize the word "awesome" in that previous sentence for you to put it in proper perspective. But I'm sure you get the point. While I understand life's tendencies to get in the way of these kind of things, I really really hope that you'll update again very soon, even if it does distract me from the college workload I should be doing. I'm really looking forward to where you'll take this.
Keep it up! :3
| GrumpyGrue 4/25/12 . chapter 15
I love this! You deserve a maggot!
| Grumpy Old Snake 4/2/12 . chapter 15
This. Is pure awesome. :D
I can picture pretty much all of this being canon, I really can. You have such an eye for detail, and have woven a wonder of a tale. Definitely one for the books. Very VERY well done, thank you for an amazing read. :-)
| Nadreth 2/22/12 . chapter 15
Yay! There was more! I'm curious do you intend to carry this to his meeting with Cale? Because that would be fantastic!
| Phireye 2/5/12 . chapter 14
Is it wrong that, as a girl, I find this to be a bloody brilliant story? I can't wait for you to get to the point where Cale comes in, and how Cale changes Richard...or not. Wonderfully twisted story! Loved how he destroyed all those demon lords! Do update soon!
| Anon 1/30/12 . chapter 14
Just read the whole of what you've written and I must say, wow. It's fantastic! Richard was so in character that I was completely offended the whole time while simultaneously loving his ridiculously over the top absurdity, XD You actually made me rethink everything I've felt for his character while reading the comic. I mean I still adore his character but now I have to face up to the fact that a crazy sociopath and everything that entails is one of my favorite bits of fiction. Absolutely amazing You have totally rocked my tiny lil world and I would be MOST grateful if you continued to do so!
Thank you again for the effort you put into keeping the masses entertained, take care.
| Athulis 1/8/12 . chapter 14
Excellent chapter my friend. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to more.
| evulnessluver36.2 12/28/11 . chapter 14
0.o poor Maikos...
| Nadreth 12/26/11 . chapter 14
This is absolutely brilliant! I love it - Richard is exactly in character in a way
I doubt many could achieve. Bravo.
| Coranai 12/22/11 . chapter 14
Oh my gosh. So dark and delicious. Everything from the casual lighthearted slaughtering of towns, to pushing Maikos's mother off a tower. It's so perfect! Everything! And I'd always wondered what must be under the mask; I think you nailed it perfectly. Except that I'd always figured that he must actually have a nose, despite the fact that it really does look flat, because it must have something to hang on... but I guess he could use something to stick it to his face.
About the time with his mother: I always imagined that you would end this story with her dying and that even with all that Richard had done he would still be her loyal loving son to the end and be heartbroken, but your way just seems... perfect. It really cements him as the monster he become. Also, way to turn one small line about Maikos's mother into an epic, epic moment.
All in all, it's turned into quite a dark story where everything has turned entirely serious except Richard. I love it. With the slow, slow pace that LFG has taken recently, with some rather uninteresting battles and politics, I can really say I'm enjoying your story more. Except now we're starting to go into some kind of subplot with Richard. So I'm excited, and we'll see how that turns out.
Can't wait to see the next chapter! I wonder how you'll end it... unless that was the end? Gosh I hope not.
| ImFasterThanTheTwoOfUsCombined 12/9/11 . chapter 5
omg. i kinda want to like read more... but iv got to study :( well, i like the way you write. i think you should make the pace a little faster. some times when a story is slow paced, it makes the audience become bored with it. and if the reader becomes bored, the story will crash. so... yeah. i like the story plot. write more please.