The characterisation of Charles feels just right in this, and your writing is so beautiful.

This was beyond gorgeous. Honestly, I'm completely speechless. The imagery, the emotions, the intensity ... This is truly beyond words.

This was beautifully written.

There's a lot of emotion in this piece of work, which is even more understandable seeing as it was based off of a real event so it's a little closer to us.

I love the way you wrote Charles, just the right amount of child-like innosence, and yet you make it clear that it is him. The scene was set incredibly well, and the extra characters were very believable and lovable (I was very sad for that little girl).